Here’s part two of my collab with Irina!
But before you continue reading, make sure you’ve read part one, which was posted on Irina’s blog, first so you have some context. We’re really just jumping right in there, you know?
I usually have a reserve of screencaps from seasonal anime, but right now Google is my guide. I’ll be including the search results I used to find these pics and gifs. Ah, you can always tell I’m doing a collab with Iri when I start bringing out the gifs.
Shout-outs to @Monsters_Master for drawing such a nice picture of Integra!
Alright, here we go!
Remy: It’s all smokes and mirrors for me. I’m a total mess and I really rely on headers to stay on-point and for my readers to be fooled into thinking I know what I’m talking about. Otherwise my posts really start turning into rambles. Fake it until you make it?
But, yes, a lot of posts seem more intent on telling or instructing you on this or that. There’s usually room for conversation regarding any sort of subject or topic since definitions can be subjective (and opinions on shows and themes and individuals are rarely completely objective), but posts that are more like conversations probably get more people talking.
Gotta agree with you regarding balancing the line between keeping things spoiler-free (so the post remains friendly for those who haven’t watched or consumed or interacted with whatever you’re talking about) and going more in-depth so those who are in-the-know can chime in and fulfill their needs and desire for conversation. It’s hard!

Hmmm, yeah, including an explanation is usually how I approach things. I feel like I’m a niche writer who sometimes writes about niche topics, so sometimes people haven’t heard about what I’m talking about. Or maybe they might want a frame of reference before I jump right in.
But maybe I’m doing people a disservice by jumping to conclusions like this. I mean, it’s not like I’m a primary source of news or announcements, right? They’d probably would have already heard or read about the latest yuri anime before reading about it on The Lily Garden, really. Buuuut if I give a brief run-down maybe the more oblivious ones will stick around instead of leaving to look it up on some major anime news site. Ahhh, that’s wishful thinking. One of my specialties as a deluded person.
By the way, do you consider it a good thing or a bad thing when a topic or a series has you wanting to say a lot? It’s probably overwhelming for those who want to share all of their thoughts for all to see, but it might not be as big of a problem for those who are more guarded or selective, I guess, since they might just purposefully avoid addressing certain aspects. Then again, there’s no way a single post can truly be comprehensive about any particular topic…
Irina: I generally see it as a good thing personally. But as even my simpler posts can meander a bit, I also find it intimidating. Hence the need to find a better way to structure myself.

A little while ago, Marth form Marth Aurion really helped me out with a post I was having trouble defining. Instead of going over everything in detail, they just told me what impressions they got from the post at a few specific points (I.e. after the intro, somewhere around the middle and what the they retained from the post as a whole). This really helped me in restructuring my thoughts and better organizing what I was saying so that I could get the correct point across (which I wasn’t in the slightest…)
I’m just going to jump back to your previous paragraph. You brought up the great point that your blog posts are on much more unusual media and topics that are much more original and not really commonly discussed on other blogs, which does make a big difference. I can see that more detailed background is needed. You also have a few exclusives.
I post reviews pretty common anime and games. I have zero industry insight. As such, I feel like a lot of my readers have already seen it (if not reviewed it themselves) so I don’t want to bore them by going over the same old story again but then I will occasionally stumble onto something that no one has really seen and I’m afraid my post makes no sense without at least giving some context.
Remy: You know what? Now that you’ve mentioned it, Marth’s usual style is rather focused since he concentrates on a few key points as he incorporates both summarization and personal takes in his content. I can see how following such a format might make it easier to keep track of things, yeah. And please, it’s a work in progress! You’ll get it right eventually, says the guy who doesn’t have it down at all. Besides, I get that you want to not be misunderstood but everyone really loves your little asides!
That exclusivity comes with the territory of being an anime hipster! Back when I wrote episode reviews I was convinced I would be the only one covering mediocre slice-of-life series which gave me a sense of duty, haha. I’m sure there really were a few others talking about these less popular shows, however, and maybe the background info really was extraneous. Perhaps it’s better to play it safe in that regard. Ah, but we all have such short attention spans as you mentioned earlier…it’s a tough call that requires experience, I think!
It goes without saying that you have a solid grasp of your own content, but you do tend to write about well-known household names when it comes to anime and games, so no explanations are really needed there. Buuut, as you said, you have been known to say your piece on underrated and overlooked gems, too, which probably does require the quick run-down. Perhaps popularity and notoriety are the only gauges we need? Surely it’s more complicated than that…
Irina: Then there’s also a question of knowing your readership. You seem to have a lot of readers from all over. You get great views from every corner of the net. Think my own audience is more concentrated on wordpress annibloggers who know just as much if not more about anime than I do and a few dedicated anime fans. I’m trying to grow my general readership beyond wordpress a bit but since I have no idea how to do that, so far my most concrete effort has been writing this paragraph…

What I’m saying is that a blog that attracts readers hat may be searching for a particular anime for the first time probably needs to present their content a little differently then one that is essentially a specialty bog cathering to readers who care more about obscure facts or unusual insights because they’ve already read all the other stuff.
Is it just me or did we stray from the topic in a post about staying on topic?
Remy: Oh, I get such a varied readership because I write about the stupidly popular stuff and then somehow it catches on sometimes. They come, get or at least attempt to get what they want, and then leave like lovers in the lonely night. These players and smooth operators rarely leave a comment, too!
Irina: I’m going to jump in here. I don’t know how many people have this experience but a coupe of my real life friends do read my blog. They do not have blogs or want one, neither do they have gravatar accounts. They’ve told me that whenever they try to like or comment on anything, my blog prompts them to create an account and on a phone – this is actually a rather painful procedure. So they give up.
That doesn’t mean they didn’t enjoy, read and even have thoughts on it but the current like/commenting process on wordpress can e a bit discouraging, especially on mobile platforms. This is a random aside but I thought I’d throw it in just to point out that engagement isn’t that easy to assess.
Remy: Well, it’s a good thing you did since now I feel like a downright Fool for acting it was so simple as well as black-and-white. Have I been secretly been turning into a Sith Lord without knowing it?
I agree that engaging with blogs is a lot harder than it should be. I know for a fact that you can’t really “like” or give golden stars to blogs without having a gravatar account or without being signed into one, which is incredibly frustrating when you’re on a mobile cellular device.
But I do seem a few comments by Anonymous users. There should already be a setting that allows someone to comment just by inputting a desired handle, email address, and website (I wonder if you can just put in “www.google.com” or something if you don’t have a blog). I have to fill out those fields all the time whenever I want to comment on Seasonal Prattle’s blog, which makes things harder than it should be for bloggers but a bit more convenient for non-bloggers? Not a bad compromise.
Irina: Yeah commenting asks you to fill out a form I think. I haven’t gone into detail mind you.
Remy: Mmm of course. I’m the only one allowed to bore the readers, after all! But filling out a form is a tiny bit better than being forced to make an account, I guess, even though there’s gotta be a better way. Some of us are romanticists~
As for your readership, I think it’s very pleasant that so many anibloggers regularly drop by and provide some insight into various topics in your comments section. I’m also not sure about what it takes to expand your readership beyond WordPress. Hmmm.
I know a few anibloggers used to or still do promote their content on Reddit. Some of my more popular posts were shared on Reddit which have caused their views to skyrocket. Guess it might be a matter of promotion and visibility?

As for going off-topic…that appears to be exactly what happened! This is the logicial conclusion when you get the two of us talking about the same topic. Guess we better wrap things up like we were like that tiny anime mummy or something.
Iri, it’s been a pleasure chugging along and going off the rails while talking about focused writing.
Irina: Pffth as aways the pleasure is entirely mine! I’ve missed our chats Rem, I hope we get to have another one in the future.
I also hope our readers will enjoy this as much as I have. I’m not sure how helpful any of this is to staying focused in posts but it certainly reminded me how fun it is to talk to fellow bloggers. I guess if you need help with keeping you eye on the ball, go read Marth’s blog! Now those are organized posts and great reads to boot (to booth?) to boohghth???
Remy: WHAT HAPPENED TO IRI?!
I look forward to our next chit chat, too. Dang, I hope she’s okay…
And yes, everyone should hit up Marth’s blog. I’m putting out a hit on his content. You all be assassins and swing by! The reward is enlightenment. Okay, I think it’s about time to end this since I’m reaching for the really bad and forced puns now. Like what Iri said, hopefully this all was little bit helpful, or at least entertaining.
Irina: This was our Marth appreciation post – that’s what we were doing, right?
Remy: MARTH MARTH MARTH MARTH

Irina: Marth’s gonna unfollow us both…
Remy: It was for the greater good… I can accept this tragic ending gracefully…
When two of my favourite bloggers Collab what happens???
I’m speechless and left with nothing to say, that’s what.
*Noiseless hand movements trying to convey whatever it is I’m trying to convey*
Though I personally enjoy slight deviations in a post (as is evident from my digressions in my posts) I’d definitely say it’s about when and where it happens.
How you and Rin-san did it is the exact way I enjoy!
Spoiler warnings, now those I appreciate, but never actually follow haha. I just ready all the posts anyway oops.
Sometimes I think of titles first but sometimes I make them up after I’m done…
This was fun!
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I try to warn, but in the end I never think a good story can be spoiled.
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That’s fair. Sometimes it just really hurts the story.
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Great collaboration! Two of my favourite blogs to read… Together?? It’s like a dream!! 💖💖
I agree with Remy that it’s sometimes good to be fairly succinct in what you’re saying sometimes (I do love a good meander, but sometimes I have so much reading to get done that it’s nice to have something to the point!) it’s hard to know where to draw the line when we all have SO MUCH that we want to say!! 🍻💖
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Haha I’m glad you liked it. It’s been a while since Iri and I teamed up!
Mmmm there’s just so much reading to be done. I hear you there! ;__;
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Fun post as always, guys. I think I blabbered on too much for replying to 2 posts, but oh well.
Spoilers: Since spoilers are subjective, I have a policy saying “I may spoil stuff for you” and just let the content speak for itself. I’m not sure anyone’s aware this policy exists, though…
Having too much to say: I normally come up with the post title first and then after the intro delineate what I’m talking about, so it’s easy to tell when I’m derailing – sidebars, “I might make another post about that one day”s and subsequent redrafts are for keeping me on track. Also, since I don’t do reviews most days, I don’t think I can take your (Remy’s) second-hand advice from D, unfortunately.
Editor: I tend to be the crazy person who generally doesn’t need an editor for typoes’ sake, but a brief reread before publishing never hurt anyone. By the way, there was a group of WordPress bloggers on Twitter who would edit each other’s stuff – that’s how I discovered who Marth was – but I think the group’s inactive at the moment.
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Fair policy in my opinion!
Sounds sensible to me. And I think that might be better for the better that you don’t do reviews most days. I’m starting to lose faith in them, a bit.
Mmm a quick last evaluation really doesn’t hurt anyone! Yeah, I was a lurker. Moya started it, I believe. It’s very quiet in there right now!
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Yeah, balancing how much you spoil is tough. I’ve always found that hard when it comes to finding bits that I didn’t like but that I know won’t bother others in particular. It’s like … I want to explain what bothered me but doing so in any great detail would potentially constitute a heavy spoiler.
The logging in to comment bit actually throws me sometimes too. I’ve tried to simplify my own so that you don’t need to log in if you don’t want to and can post anonymously now, but it’s true that trying to do the log in on a phone is more difficult than it should be.
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Right. Worrying about spoilers really impedes discussion sometimes. There are individuals who assume that discussion as a whole is better off when content doesn’t care at all about spoilers but I don’t know about that, either. It’s very grey.
Mmmm it’s not the best system. Good on you, though!
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Very grey indeed. I kinda understand when people get spoielr-heavy on older titles on the grounds that most people will likely have heard the spoilers anyway, but even then that doesn’t always ring true. Like, everyone seemed to love Gurren Lagann and spoiled a certain death for me as it was so old … but I ahdn’t even heard of the thing before it was recommended. Of course, I never finished the show due to lack of enjoyment with or without spoilers, but had I been enjoying it and managed to get to where the spoilered content took place, it would ahve wrecked the impact. I suppsoe in that regard, spoiler tags that can be collapsed and opened, or even text that needs highlighting can be useful.
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Stunning drawing. Shows a good eye and skilled hands. Wish I had either one.
I just put a spoiler alert up top. It is funny that spoilers are such a big deal. It is really uncommon for a spoiler to affect how much I enjoy an anime. Sometimes they improve it. I even watch really good anime multiple times. Let it simmer a few months or even years, then enjoy it even more second time around.
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I’m very much impressed by their drawing, too.
Yeah, I’m not that bothered by spoilers but some people get super upset by them! Rewatching shows are always fun if you like the show in question~
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That drawing is beautiful! A great eye and some skilled hands.
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Got to agree with both of you on balancing spoilers vs keeping spoiler-free. I think just marking a section with spoilers is a pretty fair way to do it. You know, talk about how the characterization or whatever is good, then “SPOILERS BEGIN NOW” and then say that the moment when blah-blah-blah happened was amazing, then going back to more general comments.
Great posts from the two of you!
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I like this approach. I always struggle with deciding how much of a warning in advance I should be giving, though.
Thank you!
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you ppl are the worst
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i should probably say something more productive.
i have a tough time with spoilers because i dont really consider many things to be “spoilers” myself. it gives me a weak grasp of what others would consider to be a spoiler. as such, the majority of my posts just throw caution to the wind. the small concession ive made is that i tend to avoid going too hard on specific events in an episode in the first paragraph (because that is what often shows on previews).
the reason i always like playing the editor role is that there’s a certain “fluid” sense to it. i can push a bit further with my thoughts than i could with a comment on a published post. a published post has that sense of being “final”, so im fine with accepting it as is.
ive struggled a bit with the barrier to entry for comments. my comments are about as minimal as i can make them, since i dont actually care if the email address you enter is real as long as it’s unique. i do what i can to store the information in browser session storage so you’re not re-typing it every time, and i’ll hide the form if that information is available so the form isnt popping up every time. and for the convenience of the wordpress users, i repost my posts to wordpress. it’s my attempt at a compromise.
in all seriousness, i appreciate the kind words. im really not sure i deserve them 😀
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Agreed
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is true
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Marth really needs more appreciation.
I loved reading these two posts. Great collab.
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He really does.
Thanks, Karandi. Glad to hear you liked it.
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Goood Integra pic!
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I thought so, too!
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